Evaluation - Question 4

Evaluation - Question 3

Evaluation - Question 2

    

Evaluation - Question 1

Review: Target Audience Feedback

Review: Final Product

Whats been changed from the feedback of the first draft?

• The first draft was unorganised, the film details and synopsis were difficult to see. The columns weren't made clear therefore, the text wasn't as separated as it shouldve been. Due to this feedback, i made sure my columns were more clear and so that it was made visible where the text is separated. 
• My critical voice wasn't established well. From this feedback I changed my review to a negative review rather than a positive review. This was made clear due to the addition of the Daily Mail quote on the side of my review. 

Review: First Draft of Product

What went well for my first draft:

• Use of image from the film
• Inclusion of a synopsis and verdict

What hasn't gone well for my first draft:

• Your review is very unorganised - it is difficult to see where the film details and synopsis are placed. This needs to be made much clearer with the use of columns to separate text - perhaps the use of subheadings may also help.
• Your critical voice is not established very well; you need to make it clear whether you like or dislike the film throughout the synopsis and your verdict.
• Your verdict is very short and does not give your readers a sense of whether the film should be viewed or not, the recommendation or lack of, needs to be much more explicit.
• Although your review is formal in places, it lacks sensationalised language. You need to include many more language devices within your writing to make this review entertaining and convincing to read. 

Review: Paper Draft

Review: Possible Images for Product

Review: Researching Existing Products

Poster: Target Audience Feedback

Poster: Final Product