More detail needed - you simply list all the tools you used. You need to explain in more detail how they were used? Why they were used and what effects they helped to achieve. Again, more detail needed with reference to how certain software programmes were used to achieve particular effects. It would be better for you to be able to show me this rather than tell me. Be more specific - can you show me an example of how you actually used a tool from photoshop and then explain in more detail what effect it achieved? You need to break it down and show me more detail - again you could revisit some of the demonstrations you may have included on the blog during your planning process, which actually demonstrated you using certain softwares or particular tools - you would just need to add a voice over to explain how you were using them and what effects you were achieving using them. Comment on things that were difficult too and why they were difficult? It might be easier for you to organise this in terms of stages. So explain which technologies you used for the research and planning stage, and then explain which technologies were used for the production stage. This might help you to structure and organise your ideas a little more coherently. Separate this more explicitly. This could be applied to any film, which is why you and Rajveer have been able to write a very similar response. It needs to be much more specific to your film. I want to see how you have used technology in your film, your poster and your review.
More detail needed - you simply list all the tools you used. You need to explain in more detail how they were used? Why they were used and what effects they helped to achieve.
ReplyDeleteAgain, more detail needed with reference to how certain software programmes were used to achieve particular effects. It would be better for you to be able to show me this rather than tell me. Be more specific - can you show me an example of how you actually used a tool from photoshop and then explain in more detail what effect it achieved? You need to break it down and show me more detail - again you could revisit some of the demonstrations you may have included on the blog during your planning process, which actually demonstrated you using certain softwares or particular tools - you would just need to add a voice over to explain how you were using them and what effects you were achieving using them.
Comment on things that were difficult too and why they were difficult?
It might be easier for you to organise this in terms of stages. So explain which technologies you used for the research and planning stage, and then explain which technologies were used for the production stage. This might help you to structure and organise your ideas a little more coherently. Separate this more explicitly.
This could be applied to any film, which is why you and Rajveer have been able to write a very similar response. It needs to be much more specific to your film. I want to see how you have used technology in your film, your poster and your review.