WWW - Helena, you show some understanding of conventions of colour, and layout, and you have attempted to use an appropriate image, which clearly links with your title. EBI - Your image needs some work. The background doesn't really work - the car and the house look out of place and they give the poster an amateurish feel. The actual picture of the box is fine but it looks like it is being purposely held up for the purpose of the photo being taken. It looks forced. Consider how you can focus more on the box, and less on the background and the hand. The strap line at the top needs to be centred and it needs a question mark as it is a question. I also think this would be better placed at the bottom of the page. Theater is American - theatre in English. The credits at the bottom have clearly been copied from another poster - they must be your own work; your own credits.
WWW - Helena, you show some understanding of conventions of colour, and layout, and you have attempted to use an appropriate image, which clearly links with your title.
ReplyDeleteEBI - Your image needs some work. The background doesn't really work - the car and the house look out of place and they give the poster an amateurish feel. The actual picture of the box is fine but it looks like it is being purposely held up for the purpose of the photo being taken. It looks forced. Consider how you can focus more on the box, and less on the background and the hand.
The strap line at the top needs to be centred and it needs a question mark as it is a question. I also think this would be better placed at the bottom of the page.
Theater is American - theatre in English.
The credits at the bottom have clearly been copied from another poster - they must be your own work; your own credits.