WWW: - Some use of a consistent colour scheme - Understanding of conventional features
EBI: - Your strapline needed to be centered and in the form of a question,this is something that was stated in the feedback of the first draft - Can you distort the colours of the music box? At the moment it doesn't look particularly sinister - Why is there the image of a hand placed next to the title of the film? This doesn't link with the themes within the film itself - Consider how you can edit the background so it is not just a plain colour, how can you use a fade or a different image in the background to further emphasise the music box?
WWW:
ReplyDelete- Some use of a consistent colour scheme
- Understanding of conventional features
EBI:
- Your strapline needed to be centered and in the form of a question,this is something that was stated in the feedback of the first draft
- Can you distort the colours of the music box? At the moment it doesn't look particularly sinister
- Why is there the image of a hand placed next to the title of the film? This doesn't link with the themes within the film itself
- Consider how you can edit the background so it is not just a plain colour, how can you use a fade or a different image in the background to further emphasise the music box?