Helena, I do prefer the poster with the music box. I feel the clown one is too obvious and gives too much away. With reference to the music box poster, I like the image and the background, and I like how you have integrated the balloons into this. The slasher type font is a bit too obvious and cliched - could you maybe experiment with some less obvious font styles? The title font needs to be bolder as it is against the tree background so it is not as explicit and prominent as it should be. The bottom of the poster seems to have a line across it - can you get rid of this? The credits are too centralised and too tall, taking up a quarter of the page. Spread them out and start from left and take them through to the other side of the page in order to reduce the depth. Are you afraid needs a question mark.
Helena, I do prefer the poster with the music box. I feel the clown one is too obvious and gives too much away.
ReplyDeleteWith reference to the music box poster, I like the image and the background, and I like how you have integrated the balloons into this.
The slasher type font is a bit too obvious and cliched - could you maybe experiment with some less obvious font styles?
The title font needs to be bolder as it is against the tree background so it is not as explicit and prominent as it should be.
The bottom of the poster seems to have a line across it - can you get rid of this?
The credits are too centralised and too tall, taking up a quarter of the page. Spread them out and start from left and take them through to the other side of the page in order to reduce the depth.
Are you afraid needs a question mark.